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00:00 – I evaluated 367 readers
00:30 – Too several characters
02:05 – Meaningless action
06:07 – Prologues
10:37 – Dream sequences
13:17 – Made-up words
16:44 – Characters awakening
18:54 – Confusing configurations
21:55 – Irrelevant characters/scenes
24:12 – Slow pacing
27:28 – Info-dumping